The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The data illustrates the amount of
money
spent by students
in the UK monthly in 2016 as well as
provides information on the sources of income
. Overall
, young people get money
from various sources, most significantly, from the student loan. Furthermore
, most of the income
is spent on rent.
Approximately half of the total income
is spent on rent. Moreover
, students
spend more than a hundred pounds on food, which is approximately one-sixth of all expenditures and makes it the second most expensive category. On socialising, travel, bills and other things the average expenditure is under a hundred, the most
lowest one being the travel of 52 pounds respectively.
Change the adjective
apply
Students
get income
from different sources, consequently
, having multiple of them at the same time. For instance
, vast
majority, precisely speaking, 80% of them Add an article
the vast
gets
Correct subject-verb agreement
get
money
from a student loan and nearly 68% gets
Correct subject-verb agreement
get
money
from their family and part-time jobs. Rest
of the categories, Correct article usage
The rest
such
as saving
and bank overdraft touch upon half of the Replace the word
savings
students
. Surprisingly, only the
small amount of Correct article usage
a
students
gets
Change the verb form
get
money
from grants and funding.Submitted by katja.otavina on
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