Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crimes.

The debates over whether hiring more

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helps reduce

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or not have been going on continuously since the number of illegal cases

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been extended recently in many states. It is believed that increased policies can bring down the problem with infractions and violence; meanwhile, a majority of individuals consider that

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aren’t doing their roles

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act isn't needed. Despite employing more

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can deter many harmful actions, I strongly believe that the government should retribute

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jobs with other factors. There’s no doubt that

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can potentially help reduce crime committees. The more

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, the more fear for perpetrators to be caught, and

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they will be deterred from committing

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. When

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officers identify specific problems, try to understand them, and make a tailored plan to solve them, it can reduce crime.

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, in New York City in 2017, the crime statistics dropped

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fewer than 300 cases of murder.

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, more

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officers bring up the effective

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response for emergencies since they are distributed more evenly. Because of the shortage of

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responders, the overload of work leads to stress in the workplace, and some unfortunate situations can happen. One of the most noticeable problems of

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recruitment stems from the unfair funding allocated. More

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means more budgets are needed for that department than the other departments,

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, the over-prioritizing and policing results from the lack of budgets for dealing with other problems at the root.

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, social workers, scholarships for underserved groups, educational programs, or some other sectors will have limited budgets. It is evident

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calculations of index illegal acts, that

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come from socio-economic conditions caused by the short amount of income for daily services. By reframing the issue in more equal and effective ways,

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issue may be improved. A case in point would be the divided capital equally, the factors that are fundamental to ensure and maintain a stable life

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as health, education, and housing should be carried out. Take into account

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education,

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of drugs, violent games, and being exposed to negative influences; the volume of homework distracts students and keeps them busy.

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an effort can reduce the occurrence of minor

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, by educating children to become civil members of society. In conclusion,

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the

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have been a great help to improve society, there are varieties of recommendations that we can take action to greater about the issue and build a peaceful world.