Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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should be considered as an essential subject than

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and

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plays an important role in student development. I think that

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and

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crucial to deal with the current global trends. On the one hand, students could develop their skills by referring to the historical

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methodologies. Usually, people address unknown issues by referring to old theories and experiences.

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lessons could help them to solve unknown problems which may arise in the future.

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virus was controlled by Sri Lankans through traditional techniques used in

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could help people to develop their skills and support to create solutions in

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situations.

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, economic advantages could not be gained by teaching

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in schools. Because

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is going towards

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and

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. Most of the countries achieved their competitive advantage

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developing a technologically advanced younger community.

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, India is going to be the future technological hub.

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of the

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IT companies establishing their plants in India

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availability of skilled workforce.

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and

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also

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important to learn to achieve economic success.

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, though I agree to teach the

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subject in schools to develop the skills of the students. I think that

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because the world is seeking

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cultural heritage
Historical perspective
Analytical skills
Contextual understanding
Technological advancements
STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
Innovation
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Job market
Climate crisis
Cultural identity
Critical thinking
Humanities
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