the pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energ production of france in 2 years

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confrontations of the variety

types

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of types

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of

energy

production

in France between 1995 to 2005.

Overall

, the most enormous changes in

energy

output have been in the petrol sector. In all types of

energy

production

, there was only minimal change over the 10-year period. First of all, the figure

of

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gas and coal started below three in ten, but it reached

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30 % in 2005. The first

number of

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production

of petrol approximately was 29 %, the next years it decreased markedly, fell by 10 % and had been at below a fifth until 2005.

Secondly

, the output line of other sectors

grew

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since 2005 ,

while

its number commenced at below 10%, it has

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within a short period of time.

On the other hand

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nuclear

energy

was less than ten per cent and the number rose rapidly next years and eventually,

this

energy

production

was 10.10% in 2005