The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentange of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Percentange of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The pie charts display the proportion of
water
used for Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic Purposes in six countries in the world which are,North and South America,Europe,Africa,Central and South East Asia.It is evident from the diagram that,
water
was mainly used for agricultural use in all countries,with North America and Europe being an exception,
while
the least is allocated to domestic aspects.
To begin
with, A significant amount of
water
was used for agriculture in all nations except North America and Europe, where
majority
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of their
water
was vastly used for industrial
purpose
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at slightly more than a half and nearly a half respectively.
Finally
, all areas used
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than 19% of
water
for domestic activities as there was an equivalent figure
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7% in Central Asia and
South
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Southeast
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East
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, which are one of the countries with the highest usage of
water
for agriculture with 88% and 81% respectively.
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