The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentange of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
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The pie charts display the proportion of
water
used for Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic Purposes in six countries in the world which are,North and South America,Europe,Africa,Central and South East Asia.It is evident from the diagram that, water
was mainly used for agricultural use in all countries,with North America and Europe being an exception, while
the least is allocated to domestic aspects.
To begin
with, A significant amount of water
was used for agriculture in all nations except North America and Europe, where majority
of their Add an article
the majority
a majority
water
was vastly used for industrial purpose
at slightly more than a half and nearly a half respectively.
Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Finally
, all areas used lesser
than 19% of Correct word choice
less
water
for domestic activities as there was an equivalent figure at
7% in Central Asia and Change preposition
of
South
East Correct your spelling
Southeast
Change the capitalization
Asia
asia
,
which are one of the countries with the highest usage of Change the capitalization
Asia
water
for agriculture with 88% and 81% respectively.Submitted by bumzyakins on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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