The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate data related to the consumption, production and profit distribution of
coffee
from different countries measured in percentages.
Overall
,
coffee
is consumed mostly in Europe with 41%
while
it is mainly produced in South Africa (44%). It can be noticed that after Europe, America has the highest proportion of
coffee
consumed, followed by Japan with 8% and
finally
,12% for the rest of the world.
On the contrary
, South Africa is the leader in
coffee
production surpassing Indonesia by double marking 22% in the chart
whereas
, Vietnam and Japan have the lowest percentage of production of the month.
Also
, when talking about profit distribution, delivery services are on top of the list with 51% followed closely by retailers with 24% meanwhile, exporters and producers both earned a similar amount with 10 and 15% respectively.
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  • pie charts
  • coffee production
  • coffee consumption
  • profit distribution
  • highest
  • lowest
  • concentrated
  • exporting countries
  • producer
  • consumer
  • significant difference
  • largest
  • territories
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