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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

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The architectural drawings illustrate the current and future plans after re construction of Southwest Airport.
Overall
, it can be seen, that today Southwest Airport has limited facilities, It will made bigger in future by adding new terminals with 18
doors
 and sky train, ATM, Car hire and bag drop. Today Southwest Airport consists of only two
doors
 for departures and
arrivals
. On the departure side, it has a check-in
counter
 north-left
corner
 and right front of it the coffee
shop
.
Then
 Security and passport control office can be seen.
Thereafter
 free space and surround the walkway terminal consist 8
doors
. On the other side
arrivals
, there is no
counter
 or building. The predicted plan for future development included new and additional facilities than today. It will build two
doors
in addition
 to departures and
arrivals
. When it comes to departure Check-in
counter
 will move to the right
corner
 in the north
while
 replacing the coffee
shop
 down the left
corner
 next to the door. A new bag drop will be installed in the place where the check-in
counter
 was placed previously. Next security and passport control
as well as
 customs remain the same.
while
 the new
shop
 will be added to the left
corner
 next
down
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to the terminal. Expected to make significant changes in the terminal area
such
 as a sky trail on behalf of the walkway and an additional 10
doors
while
 expanding with two wings. New Coffee
shop
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,
ATM
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ATMs
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, and Car hire counters are located in
arrivals
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the arrivals
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 area.
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