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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

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The architectural drawings illustrate the current and future plans after re construction of Southwest Airport.
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, it can be seen, that today Southwest Airport has limited facilities, It will made bigger in future by adding new terminals with 18
doors
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 and sky train, ATM, Car hire and bag drop. Today Southwest Airport consists of only two
doors
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 for departures and
arrivals
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. On the departure side, it has a check-in
counter
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 north-left
corner
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 and right front of it the coffee
shop
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.
Then
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 Security and passport control office can be seen.
Thereafter
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 free space and surround the walkway terminal consist 8
doors
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. On the other side
arrivals
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, there is no
counter
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 or building. The predicted plan for future development included new and additional facilities than today. It will build two
doors
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in addition
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 to departures and
arrivals
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. When it comes to departure Check-in
counter
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 will move to the right
corner
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 in the north
while
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 replacing the coffee
shop
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 down the left
corner
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 next to the door. A new bag drop will be installed in the place where the check-in
counter
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 was placed previously. Next security and passport control
as well as
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 customs remain the same.
while
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 the new
shop
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 will be added to the left
corner
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 next
down
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to the terminal. Expected to make significant changes in the terminal area
such
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 as a sky trail on behalf of the walkway and an additional 10
doors
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while
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 expanding with two wings. New Coffee
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shop
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shops
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,
ATM
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ATMs
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, and Car hire counters are located in
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arrivals
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the arrivals
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 area.
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