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You recently attended a party, where you saw one of the guests being rude to a neighbour in the next house. Write an email to the guest, •Complaining about their behaviour •Suggesting that the guest apologises to the neighbour •Asking them not to behave like this again Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir/Maam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing regarding about your behaviour
last
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 weekend July 8 in our village.
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, your behaviour is not appropriate in our
neighbour
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.
Firstly
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, I am
complaning
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complaining
 about your attitude
to
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towards
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 my
neighbour
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. My
neighbor
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neighbour
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 is
my
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apply
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one of the great people
her
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here
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 in the town. We did hear any
complain
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complaints
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 about their family even
we
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though we
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are
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were
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 noisy our music
is
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was
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 very loud that evening but she
keep
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kept
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quite
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quiet
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.
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, I am asking
your
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for your
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 apology for my
neighbour
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. I am
shame
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ashamed
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for
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of
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 what
happen
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happened
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for
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apply
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that evening. My
neighbour
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 is very kind and understanding
off
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of
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 all
term
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terms
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 in life just to say sorry.
Thirdly
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, I am asking you not to do it again so that we
call
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can
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 do
party
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a party
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will out
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without
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 restriction
again
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apply
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in our village. Thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Austina K
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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