The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The line graph demonstrates three types of crimes that happened in Newport City Centre from 2003 to 2012. It is evident that the number of crime incidents has changed significantly over the
last
10
years
. The Robbery cases are constantly lower than the other two crimes. Burglary cases dropped drastically for 4
years
straight. The proportion of car theft was constant for the first 3
years
and
then
lowered slightly. After 3
years
, it went upward again for 2
years
.
However
, in 2012, it regained its position like in 2003.
Whereas
robbery has stayed between 500 to 1000 incidents throughout the
years
. The rate of burglary from early 2003 was the highest among other crimes. From 2004, it went downhill for 4
years
, and after that stayed between 1000 to 1500 till 2012.
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  • recorded
  • trends
  • criminal activity
  • categories
  • theft
  • assault
  • vandalism
  • graph
  • x-axis
  • y-axis
  • number of crimes
  • visual representation
  • changes
  • crime rates
  • fluctuating pattern
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