Globalization has allowed rapid exchange of
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, services,
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. The growing number of multinational
companies
have created enormous commodities and
products
, offering value and enrichment in our lives. The benefits of globalization cannot be overlooked.
However
, it is imperative to look at the bigger picture and consider how our indulgence and
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insatiability for advancement
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Impacting the
environment
. Many believe that these effects have been primarily negative on the
environment
. I wholeheartedly agree and we have enough evidence to back up
this
claim including the increased release of gas emissions, alarming rates of defrostration, and ever-expanding economic specialization of nations.
Globalization significantly contributes to
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of
goods
and consumptions. Multinational
companies
substantially
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on
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market to generate revenue.
This
means that their
products
cater to a wide range of interests and preferences. One of
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perennially
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products
is iPhone. Every new version of
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creates a maddening craze across the globe. Everyone loves
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and their
products
and they seemingly can’t get enough of Apple.
While
this
is all well and good, as the
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for
products
increases, so does the release of gas emissions. It has been widely documented that human activity negatively affects the
environment
as manufacturers and factories work non-stop to produce the required supplies for
companies
and burn fossil fuels. What’s more, greater connectivity around the world means that
companies
will outsource the raw materials they need in order to reduce costs. It should be noted that not all countries have enough environmental
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in place,
therefore
more green
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will be released into the atmosphere which
further
contributes to climate change.
Furthermore
, advancements in transportation and communication technologies have allowed inter-border trade of
goods
at the cost of losing rich ecosystems and habitats. The spread of
goods
requires the building of new
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such
as roads and bridges.
This
leads to
in the process because we cut down trees to set up trade routes.
This
unfortunate side effect can be observed in Brazil where huge
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of forest are eradicated only to create space for cars and trucks to pass through.
In addition
to
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of gasses and
, we have seen economic specialization in many regions. Some countries prefer to specialize in one area of
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because they feel content to rely on their trading partners to provide what they can’t produce. The negative consequence of
that is
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Asia, people sustain their
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by overfishing, leading to
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of
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population.
Additionally
, some countries prefer to sell one type of energy
such
as gas, oil, and timber. Capitalizing on natural resources heavily will
further
devastate the
environment
.
After all
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and done, it is certainly apparent that our appetite for growth and economic expansion
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taken a heavy toll on the
environment
. Leaving our activities
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means habitats are lost, climate change is
further
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unbearable for future generations.