The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Those 2 graphs reveal information about the number of British tourists and
visitors
in 2 decades since 1979 and the rates of favourite countries that UK
people
to travels in 1999.
All in all, people
who went and gone in England increased from 1979 until 1999 while
France and Spain were the favourite countries of UK
residents.
According to
the line graph, in 1979 there was a high number of British in other countries around 12 million
people
. It was higher than UK
visitors
with just under 10 million
people
. In the next decade, UK
travelers
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travellers
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had three
with
30 Change preposition
to
million
people
, while
tourists in the UK
only doubled with
20 Change preposition
to
million
people
. By 1999, England's visitors
had increased to almost 30 millions of visitors
. UK
tourists surged up to over 50 million
people
.
Moving to the bar chart, in 1999, France was the most favourite destination country among UK
residents with over 10 million
travellers. The next most popular country was Spain by
around 9 Change preposition
with
million
UK
visitors
. Meanwhile, USA
, Greece, and Turkey were the least famous Correct article usage
the USA
country
visited by the British with less than 4 Fix the agreement mistake
countries
million
visitors
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