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The plans show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps compare the
difference
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s in the layout of Ashford in two separate years. In 2010, there was a
river
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 called
River
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 Tam across
this
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 small
town
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 from northeast to southwest, with several bungalows on the northeast bank of the
river
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 and a large forest on the northwest of the
river
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.
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, a
road
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 connecting downtown and
this
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 small
town
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 lay in the
centr
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e of the map, throughout
the
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the whole
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whole
town
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 from eas
t to
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west
 west but ferries were needed if people wanted to across the
river
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.
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, t
her
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e
was
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a large
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a large blank on the south of the
road
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. Now
thi
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s
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has
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town
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 has witnessed enormous changes. The noticeable can be seen in the previous bungalow area, where many modern multi-s
tory resi
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residences
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dences have been built.
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the
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apply
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r, i
n the
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centre
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centre of the
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has
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road
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 has witne
ssed the con
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the construction
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struction of a bridge.
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, not only a newly-bu
ilt
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park has been available on the southwest corner of the map, but
also
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 a new Yacht marina with a branch
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road t
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the living
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o the living area has been erected on the southeast of the
river
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.
In summar
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compared
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y, compared with 2010, now
this
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town
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 contains more residents and transport conditions have improved.
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