The plans show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps compare the

difference

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s in the layout of Ashford in two separate years. In 2010, there was a

river

called

River

Tam across

this

small

town

from northeast to southwest, with several bungalows on the northeast bank of the

river

and a large forest on the northwest of the

river

Additionally

, a

road

connecting downtown and

this

small

town

lay in the

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e of the map, throughout

the

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the whole

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whole

town

from eas

t to

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west

west but ferries were needed if people wanted to across the

river

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, t

her

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was

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a large

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a large blank on the south of the

road

. Now

thi

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town

has witnessed enormous changes. The noticeable can be seen in the previous bungalow area, where many modern multi-s

tory resi

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dences have been built.

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n the

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centre of the

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road

has witne

ssed the con

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the construction

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struction of a bridge.

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, not only a newly-bu

ilt

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park has been available on the southwest corner of the map, but

also

a new Yacht marina with a branch

road t

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the living

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o the living area has been erected on the southeast of the

river

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y, compared with 2010, now

this

town

contains more residents and transport conditions have improved.

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3Word repetition
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4 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The plans show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

Many museums charge for the entries while others are free. Do you think the advantage of charging people for admission for museum outweigh its disadvantages.

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages.

In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?