The graph below gives Information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below shows information about the
percentage
. of the population
in four Asian countries
living in cities from 1970 to 2020 and after with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia are Asian countries
.
This
graph shows the horizontal axis is the year between 1970 and 2040, and the vertical axis is the percentage
of the total population
. Overall
, it can be easily seen that all four countries
has
a rise in Change the verb form
have
population
between 1970 and 2040.
Malaysia and Indonesia started from 12 to about 30 in 1970 but these countries
got the highest improvement in 2040.
After almost remaining in the 70s, 30 per cent shows in the Philippines. there population
but they get the highest percentage
represents the in 1990 this
country. However
, in 2010 drop
down that Wrong verb form
it dropped
percentage
and get
Wrong verb form
got
the
more improvement in another 30 years. Thailand has a slow rise Correct article usage
apply
up
in Change preposition
apply
this
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