There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...........,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the inconsistency of
bus
frequency at the Airport and Bovaird intersection in Brampton.
For the last
two weeks, the bus
arrival and departure are not aligned with its schedule. The buses are always delayed during the peak working hours making it uncomfortable for daily public transport passengers. Furthermore
, there is less number of buses on the route during the weekdays.
Because of this
issue, it is affecting my work and personal life. Since this
issue, I have been reaching my office an hour later than the actual start time. In addition
, less frequency is causing overcrowding in the bus
. As a result
, the time the bus
reaches my nearest bus
station, it gets full which forces me to take the next departure.
I believe, if buses are scheduled for every 10 minutes during morning and afternoon peak hours, then
this
problem will be resolved. This
will also
encourage more people to take the bus
for their daily work commute.
Please give the matter your immediate attention.
Yours Faithfully,
Kunj SoniSubmitted by destroyerblackhood2302 on
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