The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The scheme illustrates the process of the production of
glass
containers.
Overall
, the nine main steps are followed during the process from starting with heating the pre-products to the
seperation
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separation
phase. First and foremost, precursor
glass
surplus
melted
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is melted
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in a big oven called
furnace
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a furnace
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at 105
celcius
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. After the meltdown
completed
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is completed
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, the hot
glass
pressed
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is pressed
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by
a special machinery
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special machinery
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in a mould. Conducting an appropriate pressure by press machine,
this
process gives the special shape
of
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to
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container's
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the container's
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thick wall. Eventually, a pressed
glass
container
confronted
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was confronted
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with air for a
while
. After
an
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apply
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enough air conduction,
container
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the container
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met with
kiln
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a kiln
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approximately
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of approximately
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482
celcius
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celsius
; meanwhile, extreme heat alters the structure of the
glass
container
. After exposure
of
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to
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high degrees,
cooling
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the cooling
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phase is started in the kiln
about
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for about
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60 minutes at 25 degrees.
Thefore
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Therefore
,
labours
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labourers
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have to check every single
glass
containers
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container
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before packaging.
As a result
,
malfactured
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manufactured
products
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are seperated
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seperated
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separated
by labours to recycle,
then
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and then
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properly manufactured
glass
containers are packaged for distribution.
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