The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The scheme illustrates the process of the production of
glass
containers.
Overall
, the nine main steps are followed during the process from starting with heating the pre-products to the seperation
phase.
First and foremost, precursor Correct your spelling
separation
glass
surplus melted
in a big oven called Add a missing verb
is melted
furnace
at 105 Correct article usage
a furnace
celcius
. After the meltdown Change the capitalization
Celcius
completed
, the hot Add a missing verb
is completed
glass
pressed
by Add a missing verb
is pressed
a special machinery
in a mould. Conducting an appropriate pressure by press machine, Remove the article
special machinery
a piece of special machinery
this
process gives the special shape of
Change preposition
to
container's
thick wall. Eventually, a pressed Correct article usage
the container's
glass
container
confronted
with air for a Add a missing verb
was confronted
while
.
After an
enough air conduction, Remove the article
apply
container
met with Correct article usage
the container
kiln
Correct article usage
a kiln
approximately
482 Change preposition
of approximately
celcius
; meanwhile, extreme heat alters the structure of the Correct your spelling
celsius
glass
container
. After exposure of
high degrees, Change preposition
to
cooling
phase is started in the kiln Correct article usage
the cooling
about
60 minutes at 25 degrees. Change preposition
for about
Thefore
, Correct your spelling
Therefore
labours
have to check every single Correct your spelling
labourers
glass
containers
before packaging. Fix the agreement mistake
container
As a result
, malfactured
products Correct your spelling
manufactured
Add a missing verb
are seperated
seperated
by labours to recycle, Correct your spelling
separated
then
properly manufactured Correct word choice
and then
glass
containers are packaged for distribution.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, container with synonyms.
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