The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
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Meadowside
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village
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and
Fonton
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, a side-by-side town,
development
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from 1962 until now.
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, there were
biggest
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transformations in both towns, the most noticeable was the development of
main
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road
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that connected those cities and increasing new buildings
such
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as
sport centre
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sports centres
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,
hotel
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hotels
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,
station
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stations
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, business
park
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parks
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, etc. Back in 1962,
Meadowside
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village
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and
Fonton
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were separated by water. In
Meadowside
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village
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there was only
small
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a small
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road
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which connected the
village
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to others,
while
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in
Fonton
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only had a railroad.
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, the growth started in 1985, in
Meadowside
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village
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there
was
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building developments,
such
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as
housing
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a housing
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estate, leisure complex and
sport
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centre.
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, it had two main roads; the first
road
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connected the
village
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with the other, and
new
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the new
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main
road
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that connected to
Fonton
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.
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, in
Fonton
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there was not developed yet.
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,
Meadowside
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village
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and
Fonton
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experienced significant development. The
most
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biggest
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change is now both towns are connected by land. There are several new
facilitations
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facilities
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that have been built, namely a hotel, station, and business park.
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, one railroad has been developed,
thus
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there are 2 railroads near
Fonton
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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