Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

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could be
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export from
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the
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where
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. There are many countries which have
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to save, not waste
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we can use for living.
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in countries where are no
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enough
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would like to state that there is no magic bullet and summerizing everything up we all should
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share
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resource
  • growing worldwide demand
  • industrial growth
  • water-intensive crops
  • prolonged droughts
  • usable water
  • water conservation
  • water efficiency
  • infrastructure
  • fixing leaks
  • water-efficient appliances
  • water waste
  • renewable energy sources
  • water footprint
  • transboundary water basins
  • water-stressed regions
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