Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

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Topic Vocabulary:

limited resource
growing worldwide demand
industrial growth
water-intensive crops
prolonged droughts
usable water
water conservation
water efficiency
infrastructure
fixing leaks
water-efficient appliances
water waste
renewable energy sources
water footprint
transboundary water basins
water-stressed regions

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Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

Fully explain your ideas

In modern societies, it is possible for people to go shopping, work, and communicate via the internet without face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. do you agree or disagree

Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

A group of people believe that smoking in the public should be banned. Other groups of people argue that it should not. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.