The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the proportion of generation of power from six different types of natural sources of energy in a state between 1985 and 2003.
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it is clear that
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the maximum portion of energy is derived from oil followed by Nuclear and natural
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. On the other side, the rest percentage of power generated from coal,hydrogen and other renewable sources. In terms of oil, nuclear and natural
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usage, which comprise the maximum portion of usage; the use of oil and natural
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reduced over the period from 52% to 39% and from 22% to 17%, respectively.
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, the use of natural
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increased from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003.
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, the rest of the sources show quite a different trend during the years. The consumption of coal increased by 5%, starting from 8% in 1985 to 13% in 2003.
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, the use of other renewable increased by 3%
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of the period.
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, the generation of energy using hydrogen remained unchanged (4%) throughout the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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