You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention on
certain Change preposition
to
issues
which i
have faced during my business visit Change the capitalization
I
at
your hotel. I stayed in Change preposition
to
a
executive suite Change the article
an
room
which was booked by my company during our conference meeting in a hall downstairs.
I had a
worst experience Change the article
the
while
staying in your facility. I got harrased
by your hotel Correct your spelling
harassed
staff
for complaining about the food, as the items were extreme
spicy. In return, the Change the adjective
extremely
staff
stated that he cannot
do anything about it and blamed me for that complaint. Wrong verb form
could not
Also
, the mini bar which i
was offered in the Change the capitalization
I
room
was empty and I have notified the reception but no further
actions made
by your Add a missing verb
were made
staff
.
For the next time, please make to educate your staff
about greeting and solving customer's issues
rather then
blaming the customer itself. Replace the word
than
Moreover
, make sure to double-check the amenities that you are providing with the room
,
because it was Remove the comma
apply
high-end
Correct article usage
a high-end
room
and we expected to
be the best.
I Correct pronoun usage
it to
will
really appreciate Wrong verb form
would
if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
bring Wrong verb form
could
out
these Change preposition
apply
issues
to your higher team and fix it
Correct pronoun usage
them
,
so that we don't face Remove the comma
apply
same
Correct article usage
the same
issues
again.
Yours faithfully,
Shivank JalhotraSubmitted by ishan1502ishan on
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