You made a reservation at a hotel for you and your colleagues to stay during a business trip, but you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter – Give details of your booking – Explain what changes you need to make – Ask for some special arrangements to be made for your business meetings.

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Dear Sir/Ma’am I am Kanika Gupta, and I booked four deluxe rooms in your hotel for six days in August. I am writing

this

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letter to request that you change our booking

dates

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and the number of rooms for the period. I was supposed to stay in the hotel

along with

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three colleagues, from 6th August to 11th August 2021.

However

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due to

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the change in meeting

dates

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, we will not be able to check in on the given

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Hence

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, I am requesting you to kindly change our arrival

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to 23rd August and departure

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to 28th August. Now that the meeting is postponed, more colleagues will possibly be joining us for the meeting.

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, I

also

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request you to increase the number of rooms from three to five.

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, now that the meeting is postponed, we would require a new meeting venue. I would like to request arrangements for our business meeting for two days for 15 employees. That would be 24th and 25th August respectively. I regret the inconvenience caused to you

due to

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the above changes. I look forward to a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely,

manipreet1217Fri Oct 27 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to enhance lexical resource.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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