You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter with regard to the brochure advertisement of
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for
walking
tour in the Rishikesh mountains.
I believe, Correct article usage
a walking
such
travel opportunities does
not come often and as a person who likes to explore the different parts of Change the verb form
do
world
, it is a good chance. Add an article
the world
This
tour will allow me to connect with Correct article usage
the nature
nature
beauty Replace the word
natural
these
mountains and Change preposition
of these
its
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their
scenary
offers. Correct your spelling
scenery
In addition
, this
tour will help me with my college assignment which includes the study on
different mountains and landscapes.
Another thing is, I was not able to find any Change preposition
of
further
details on this
trip. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with dates when this
trip is scheduled and the cost associated with it.
I would also
like to inform you on
my recent accident which Change preposition
of
cause
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caused
fracture
to my left hand. I would like to know if Add an article
a fracture
the fracture
this
trip have
any stage which Change the verb form
has
concern
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concerns
this
fitness issue for me. I am worried with
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about
this
problem in term
of my fitness level.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Kunj SoniFix the agreement mistake
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task response
Include more specific details about why you are interested in the tour. What aspects of the mountains and scenery attract you?
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more effectively. Each paragraph should have a clear focus and develop one main idea.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and precise language to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Pay more attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and accuracy.
