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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. In your letter-

#authorities #sports #facilities #age #group #area #letter-
Dear sir , I am gurpreet
singh
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 and a resident of
abdullapur chuhane
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Abdullapur Chuhane
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 which is situated
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in malerkotla
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malerkotla
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Malerkotla
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.I am writing
this
 letter to
government
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the government
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 you provide some sports for young people
for
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in
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 the area.
In these
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These
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 days , two sports are already available
like as
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apply
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cricket and football. Teenagers can enjoy these games
due to
authorities
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authorities'
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 school
ground
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grounds
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 but office
worker
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workers
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 cannot play these sports in
evening
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the evening
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 time. ln my town a huge open ground where individual putting the garbage. I do request administration that the take
comes
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new games here badminton and basketball if that youth age group and office masses can play these games late
night
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at night
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 after
their
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apply
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work.
This
 would
benefits
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 not
youngsters
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only youngsters
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 and office goers but
also
 all
people
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the people
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 of
area
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the area
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. they would
healthy
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be healthy
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 and physically strong
as well as
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booster
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boosters
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.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully, Gurpreet
singh
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Singh
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task response
Ensure that the letter is well-structured with clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to use appropriate transitions to improve the coherence between sentences and paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary by using a wider range of words and phrases.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve accuracy.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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