One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, •suggest a suitable date and time for the party • recommend a place • discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to tell you the date and time of the party for our teammate Tajinder Singh which you told me to organize. Tajinder will leave our company in the second week of November. I am planning a beautiful celebration

this

weekend because we have a holiday on Monday. I think we have enough time to spend with each other and there is no pressure of any workload.

Moreover

, we will start the function at 5 pm and finish at 11 pm. Apart from that, I checked the reviews of various restaurants in Brampton but I like the most is Italian Cafe which is very near to our office location. It is very convenient for all the workers because they are familiar with

this

area. One big reason to choose

this

place is because of its food, the quality of the dishes is very popular in Canada. One famous musician will

also

come in the evening to entertain us. I believe it will be a memorable get-together and if you want to change anything or give me suggestions, please free to reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, TS

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Sat Oct 28 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

194 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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