The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.

The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that
car
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the car
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was preferred the most in all countries, excluding France where more people favoured bicycles.
Additionally
, all nations had a considerable disparity between preferences, especially in terms of France with car outnumbered
others
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other
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transport methods.
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