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Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK schools in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the informatin by selecting and reporting the main featrures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the pie
carts
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 give information about the changes in annual spending by
a particular UK schools
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particular UK schools
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 in 1981,1991 and 2002.
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, the Teachers' salaries
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 the main part
their
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 costs. In 1981 the
Teaches'
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 salaries which
was
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stood at 40% just under half of the pie chart faced an
increas
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increase
 to 50% in 1991.
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, it stood at 45% in 2001
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, the Other workers' salaries which
approximetly
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approximately
 a
quartr
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quarter
 of chart 28% in 1981
recpectively
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respectively
 decreased in 1991 and 2001 to 22% and 15%. In
contenary
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contrary
centenary
,
the
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Insurance which was 2% at the beginning
dramaticaly
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dramatically
 rose to 8% in 2001.
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, the resources and the Furniture and equipment costs which were at 15% in 1981 changed in 2001 and stood at 9% and 23%.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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