One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, •suggest a suitable date and time for the party • recommend a place • discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available
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Dear sir,
I am writing you
this
letter to inform you about the details in regards
to the farewell party for our teammate Qusai which you requested me to organize.
Qusai is leaving our company on the 3rd of Fix the agreement mistake
regard
july
. I am planning a picnic party Change the capitalization
July
this
weekend if you don't mind. I thought that it would be a great opportunity to celebrate as well as
get to know each other more as a team. we will start to gather around 12:00
pm in the company parking lot, after that, I arranged for us a minibus to take us to the lake where the party will take place.
Upon our arrival to the lake, there will be waiting for us the catering company for food and drinks Correct your spelling
12.00
as well as
desserts. Me and other team members also
arrange a bunch of fun activities to do.
I believe it will be a memorable get-together and if you want to change or add anything or give me suggestions, please feel free to reply at your earliest convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
YMSubmitted by yaramuati on
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Clearly state the suggested date and time for the party.
coherence cohesion
Provide specific recommendations for a suitable place.
coherence cohesion
Give more details and options for food and entertainment choices.
coherence cohesion
Address the manager in a more formal and respectful way.
task achievement
Ensure there is a clear and complete response to all the points in the task prompt.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the overall lexical resource.
grammatical range
Improve the grammatical range by using a variety of complex sentence structures.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite