The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts depict the proportion of
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water
consumption in six areas across the globe. On the other hand
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the use of Change preposition
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water
in that period of time.
Interestingly, similar
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a similar
water
consumption pattern was observed among Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, with around 80% of the water
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and, remaining
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the remaining
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for industrial and domestic purposes. Meanwhile, the farming exercises in South Wrong verb form
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American
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America
also
extracted most of their water
resources (70%), the proportion is slightly less than that of the above mentioned
three countries.
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above-mentioned
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, North American and European manufacturers contribute to the majority of the Correct your spelling
Contrarily
water
consumption, both account for around half of the overall
water
use. At the same time, farmlands and hosueholds
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households
household
water
utilization rank after industrial application respectively.
In conclusion, the distribution on
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water
usage indirectly showcases the economic development in different regions. In short, less developed countries carry out more economic activities in agriculture while
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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