You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates information about British
emigration
(Australia
, Spain, new zealand
, the USA and France) to the destination selected for four years.
Correct your spelling
New Zealand
Overall
, we can see that Australia
has the highest emigration
in the Periods 2004 to 2007.
In contrast
, the highest Number
of people who emigration arrived
from Wrong verb form
emigrated
Australia
was above 40000. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
in
New Zealand has Change preposition
apply
lowest
Change the article
the lowest
Number
around 20000 in 2004. In addition
in 2005
the Add a comma
2005,
number
of people arrived
in Correct pronoun usage
who arrived
Australia
less
than 40000.Add a missing verb
was less
In
opposite Change preposition
On
there
was Correct your spelling
other
a
Correct article usage
the
Numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
Number
emigration
to USA
Correct article usage
the USA
lowest
in 2005.
Add a missing verb
was lowest
On the other
hand
Add a comma
hand,
Australia
has
the highest Wrong verb form
had
Number
in 2006 it reached above 50000 for Fix capitalization
number
emigration
whereas
New Zealand has the lowest Number
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words emigration, australia, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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