The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table and charts illustrate the information about the police cost in one area of Britain, from 2017 to 2018.
While
the table shows the source of money came from, the charts indicate how it was shared.
With regards to police
budget, the highest cost was in the national government sources both in 2017 and 2018 at 175.5 and 177.8 million respectively. Add an article
the police
In contrast
, the other resources (eg grants) was
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were
in
the lowest at 38 million in 2017 and it Change preposition
at
was
slightly increased Unnecessary verb
apply
at
just 38.5 million in 2018.
In 2017, the money was spent the most Change preposition
to
at
salaries (officers and staff) at 75%, and it Change preposition
on
was
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
at
69% in the next year. Change preposition
to
Moreover
, the cost for
the technology was Change preposition
of
spent
Verb problem
apply
the
lower, in 2017 and 2018, at just 8% and 14% respectively. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, the buildings and transport were spent at the same percentage at 17% in the period given.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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