The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
three
given
pie charts provide information on Verb problem
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amount
of Add an article
the amount
three
types ingredients
in Change preposition
of ingredients
variety
of Add an article
a variety
meals
(breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snack) in America. Overall
, Americans’ dinner meals
always contain more sodium
, saturated fat, and sugar
compared to their snacks, lunch, and breakfast menu
.
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menus
To begin
with, the total amount
of those three
kinds of nutriens
in dinner Correct your spelling
nutrients
meals
is 78% which are 43% of sodium
, 37% of saturated fat, and 23% of sugar
, followed by snack containing 77%; 14% of sodium
, 21% of saturated fat, and 42% sugar
which is the most amount
of nutrient among other typical
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another typical menu
other typical menus
menu
. Next,
the percentages of additives of
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on
lunch
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the lunch
menu
tend to equal
which include 29% of Add a missing verb
be equal
sodium
, 26% of saturated fat, and 19% of sugar
, 74% in total.
In terms of the smallest amount
of the three
types of those
ingredients in Correct determiner usage
apply
meals
, breakfast
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the breakfast
menu
has 14% of
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apply
sodium
, which is same
Correct article usage
the same
to
snack Change preposition
as
meals
, 16% of
saturated fat, and 16% Change preposition
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of
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sugar
, which only contain
46% in total.Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
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