The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
three
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given
pie charts provide information on Verb problem
apply
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amount
of Add an article
the amount
three
types Use synonyms
ingredients
in Change preposition
of ingredients
variety
of Add an article
a variety
meals
(breakfast, lunch, dinner, and snack) in America. Use synonyms
Overall
, Americans’ dinner Linking Words
meals
always contain more Use synonyms
sodium
, saturated fat, and Use synonyms
sugar
compared to their snacks, lunch, and breakfast Use synonyms
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menu
.
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menus
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with, the total Linking Words
amount
of those Use synonyms
three
kinds of Use synonyms
nutriens
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nutrients
meals
is 78% which are 43% of Use synonyms
sodium
, 37% of saturated fat, and 23% of Use synonyms
sugar
, followed by snack containing 77%; 14% of Use synonyms
sodium
, 21% of saturated fat, and 42% Use synonyms
sugar
which is the most Use synonyms
amount
of nutrient among Use synonyms
other typical
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another typical menu
other typical menus
menu
. Use synonyms
Next,
the percentages of additives Linking Words
of
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on
lunch
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the lunch
menu
tend to Use synonyms
equal
which include 29% of Add a missing verb
be equal
sodium
, 26% of saturated fat, and 19% of Use synonyms
sugar
, 74% in total.
In terms of the smallest Use synonyms
amount
of the Use synonyms
three
types of Use synonyms
those
ingredients in Correct determiner usage
apply
meals
, Use synonyms
breakfast
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the breakfast
menu
has 14% Use synonyms
of
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apply
sodium
, which is Use synonyms
same
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the same
to
snack Change preposition
as
meals
, 16% Use synonyms
of
saturated fat, and 16% Change preposition
apply
of
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apply
sugar
, which only Use synonyms
contain
46% in total.Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
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