There is no denying the fact that
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musical
in schools.
it is a commonly held belief that
should be
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how to use different types of musical
, there is
an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it is
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thing to teach
musical
.
with, learning the sciences and engineering will be better for
.
, these fields are countries' future and
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can be made by their hands.
, sciences will help them
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their knowledge and
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their soft skills ,
as creativity, critical thinking, and
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.
, there are many countries like Saudi Arabia , and Qatar
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to alter their
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plans by developing and updating
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subjects.
Another point to consider,
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in musical
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. It is
possible to say that they always prefer staying in
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place
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in
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one.
, some families do not allow
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or
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with musical
.
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Arabic countries do not listen to songs and do not care about
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because of
reasons.
In conclusion,
people having different views. I believe that the governments should invest in
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system , since it is a crucial sector and
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to build
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future.
, they should increase awareness about the importance of
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subjects.