Some educators believe that every child should be thought how to play musical instruments. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no denying the fact that

engaged

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musical

instruments

in schools.

While

it is a commonly held belief that

children

should be

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how to use different types of musical

instruments

, there is

also

an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it is

bad

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thing to teach

children

musical

instruments

.

To begin

with, learning the sciences and engineering will be better for

children

.

In other words

, these fields are countries' future and

it

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can be made by their hands.

In addition

, sciences will help them

expanding

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their knowledge and

improving

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their soft skills ,

such

as creativity, critical thinking, and

problem solving

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problem-solving

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.

For example

, there are many countries like Saudi Arabia , and Qatar

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tend

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to alter their

education's

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education

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plans by developing and updating

education's

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education

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subjects. Another point to consider,

children

do not have

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interesting

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in musical

aspect

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. It is

also

possible to say that they always prefer staying in

comfortable

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place

not

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in

noisy

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one.

Moreover

, some families do not allow

to

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thier

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their

children

learning

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to learn

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or

playing

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play

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with musical

instruments

.

For instance

, most

of

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Arabic countries do not listen to songs and do not care about

it

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them

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because of

religous

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religious

reasons. In conclusion,

despit

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despite

people having different views. I believe that the governments should invest in

educational

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the educational

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system , since it is a crucial sector and

having abilities

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to build

success

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future.

Also

, they should increase awareness about the importance of

educational's

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subjects.