The charts below describe 4 sectors of employment, in 2009 and 2020, in two towns. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show information about people who got employed and divided into some sectors in manufacturing, hospitality, engineering, and teaching the diagram
also
differentiates into two separated times over an eleven-year period.
Overall
, the quantity data from the hospital and teaching employed from 2009 time until 2020 significantly rose, and the other employers had the same percentages of numbers, and some of them fell in ratio.
To begin
with, the Hospital had 15% workers in 2009 and grew by 5% in 2020 years, and people who were hired to teach just 10%, after over eleven years increased by 20%. On the other hand
, in 2009 manufacturing was one the popularity at the time because the surge of the ratio was 40%, despite of in 2020 the number of people deep by 15%. One of the occupations that still has the same ratio every year was engineering which had 35% employed.Submitted by waauliya011 on
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