Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say that the government should take responsibility for planting trees while others opine that it is the responsibility of the citizens to plant trees in their houses. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are controversial perspectives heating debate over the the fact of reforestation.A segment of society reckons that it is the duty of authorities to plant forests,
however
,others opine that it is the obligation of locals to maintain trees
.This
essay will elaborate both
these narratives and I will discuss my perception in conclusion.
The first perspective that narratives that the responsibility of planting Change preposition
on both
trees
should be main
concern of regimes .Add an article
the main
a main
According to
this
doctrine,as authorities have command on
taxes,Change preposition
of
as a result
, they should put thier
focal point effortsCorrect your spelling
their
to make
Change preposition
into making
habit
eco-friendly.Fix the agreement mistake
habits
Additionally
, they should also
instruct locals by organising various events over the matter of awareness of CO2 emission which is produced due to
consumption
of fuels which causes global warming,Correct article usage
the consumption
greenhouse
effect Correct article usage
the greenhouse
as well
as
soil erosion.Correct word choice
and
For instance
,it has been observed that in America,the amount of CO2 enlarging
gradually .
Wrong verb form
enlarges
Examing
the latter view, proponents argue that the locals are responsibleCorrect your spelling
Examine
of
maintaining Change the preposition
for
Add an article
the forest
forest
, as Fix the agreement mistake
forests
this
isCorrect your spelling
their
thier
social right.As a matter of fact ,the core idealogy behind supporting this
idea is government are also
responsible for other aspects such
as providing free education,
and taking steps towards Remove the comma
apply
economy
betterment.Replace the word
economic
In contrast
,citizens should take steps by own thier
own Correct your spelling
their
selfs
,Correct your spelling
selves
in other words
,instead
of using thier
own cars they should use public transport.Correct your spelling
their
Moreover
,they should also
take care of trees
that are on bank
side of roads ,by providing water and other important nutrients to them Add an article
the bank
as well
as
they should Correct word choice
and
also
plant trees
in thier
homes.Correct your spelling
their
For instance
,according to
recent research,which
states Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
the habitat cannot become eco-friendly withoutCorrect word choice
apply
having
the struggles of citizens towards Unnecessary verb
apply
this
issue.
To conclude
, both stances have their own feasibility and merits,I believe that administrations are less responsible because they have other major concerns.Therefore
, citizens should consider their vital priority to maintain forests to prevent surrounding form pollutants.Submitted by notkhan01 on
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