The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information
of
Change preposition
in
chart
provides the Correct article usage
the chart
amount
of seals, whales and dolphins Change the quantifier
number
decumented
in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
Correct your spelling
documented
Overall
, there was a
increase in the Change the article
an
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
this
Correct determiner usage
these
fishs
, with Correct your spelling
fish
quantity
of dolphins Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
witnessed
a significant rise throughout the period. Wrong verb form
witnessing
In addition
, seals and whales experienced a flutuation
in the middle phase.
Beginning of the duration, the dolphins had about 18 individuals in 2006, before dramatically Correct your spelling
fluctuation
grow
to over 50 in 2018 and became the type Wrong verb form
growing
fish
Change preposition
of fish
had
the most.
About 42 seals Correct pronoun usage
that had
recorded
in Add a missing verb
were recorded
this
nation in 2006, with a strong unsteadiness in the first eight years and a final climbe
from around 35 in 2014 to 45 in 2018. Correct your spelling
climb
climbed
Similarly
, the figure for the whales fluctuated in the range from nearly 22 to 25 from 2006 to 2010, followed by a mild decrease to 21 in 2014 and the end
at 28 in the final year.Wrong verb form
ended
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