The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives us information about the citizen's expenditure in the UK with the percentage of total spending on three different classifications.
Food
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and
Drink
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, Restaurant and Hotel,
Entertainment
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.
In addition
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to the ages under 30 to above 76.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the highest rate was in the
Food
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and
Drink
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while
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the medium spend was in the
Entertainment
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whereas
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the dwindle category was in the restaurant and Hotel. Glancing at the chart reveals that, the expenditure of citizens under 30 have an amount of 13 per
cent
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for Restaurants and hotels
while
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entertainment
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has only 8 per
cent
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while
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the smallest one for
this
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age
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is
food
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and
drink
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,
hence
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, the restaurant and hotels go down until 61-75 to fall dramatically after that an increase by 10 per
cent
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.
Moreover
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, the total spending on
Food
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and
drink
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goes up sharply in all ages to end at 23 per
cent
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in the
age
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76+.
Also
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,
entertainment
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increased slightly in the two first ages after rising directly from 14 per
cent
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at the
age
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of 46 to 23 per
cent
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at the
age
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of 75 after that dropped intensely at the
age
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76+
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of 76+
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by ending at 13 per
cent
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of total spending.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink, entertainment, cent, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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