The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives us information about the citizen's expenditure in the UK with the percentage of total spending on three different classifications.
Food
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Drink
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Entertainment
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to the ages under 30 to above 76.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest rate was in the Linking Words
Food
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Drink
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while
the medium spend was in the Linking Words
Entertainment
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whereas
the dwindle category was in the restaurant and Hotel.
Glancing at the chart reveals that, the expenditure of citizens under 30 have an amount of 13 per Linking Words
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entertainment
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, the restaurant and hotels go down until 61-75 to fall dramatically after that an increase by 10 per Linking Words
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, the total spending on Linking Words
Food
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drink
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entertainment
increased slightly in the two first ages after rising directly from 14 per Use synonyms
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