The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives us information about the citizen's expenditure in the UK with the percentage of total spending on three different classifications.
Food
and Drink
, Restaurant and Hotel, Entertainment
. In addition
to the ages under 30 to above 76.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest rate was in the Food
and Drink
while
the medium spend was in the Entertainment
whereas
the dwindle category was in the restaurant and Hotel.
Glancing at the chart reveals that, the expenditure of citizens under 30 have an amount of 13 per cent
for Restaurants and hotels while
entertainment
has only 8 per cent
while
the smallest one for this
age
is food
and drink
, hence
, the restaurant and hotels go down until 61-75 to fall dramatically after that an increase by 10 per cent
. Moreover
, the total spending on Food
and drink
goes up sharply in all ages to end at 23 per cent
in the age
76+. Also
, entertainment
increased slightly in the two first ages after rising directly from 14 per cent
at the age
of 46 to 23 per cent
at the age
of 75 after that dropped intensely at the age
76+
by ending at 13 per Change preposition
of 76+
cent
of total spending.Submitted by alihafiid on
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