The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2024.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives us information about the citizen's expenditure in the UK with the percentage of total spending on three different classifications.
Food
and
Drink
, Restaurant and Hotel,
Entertainment
.
In addition
to the ages under 30 to above 76.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest rate was in the
Food
and
Drink
while
the medium spend was in the
Entertainment
whereas
the dwindle category was in the restaurant and Hotel. Glancing at the chart reveals that, the expenditure of citizens under 30 have an amount of 13 per
cent
for Restaurants and hotels
while
entertainment
has only 8 per
cent
while
the smallest one for
this
age
is
food
and
drink
,
hence
, the restaurant and hotels go down until 61-75 to fall dramatically after that an increase by 10 per
cent
.
Moreover
, the total spending on
Food
and
drink
goes up sharply in all ages to end at 23 per
cent
in the
age
76+.
Also
,
entertainment
increased slightly in the two first ages after rising directly from 14 per
cent
at the
age
of 46 to 23 per
cent
at the
age
of 75 after that dropped intensely at the
age
76+
Change preposition
of 76+
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by ending at 13 per
cent
of total spending.
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