The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the process of shaping
glass
containers which can be roughly divided into two stages.
Initially
,
glass
particles are put into a furnace with a temperature of 105 degrees Celsius and melted into a piece of hot
glass
.
Then
the hot
glass
is pressed into the first mould
where
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is shaped into a
container
with
thick
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a thick
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wall. After
transformed
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transforming
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into the second mould,
this
container
is
further
shaped
through
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by
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blowed
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blew
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in the air outside. The following stages are mainly aimed at staying in shape and packaging. The shaped
container
in the second mould is transformed into a kiln where the
container
is heated at 482 degrees Celsius and
then
cooled at 25 degrees Celsius for 60 minutes to contain its shape.
Finally
, every
glass
container
are
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is
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checked by engineers
in
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apply
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which the completed containers are packaged and broken ones are collected in a waste bucket.
Overall
, the process consists of nine steps, beginning with melting glasses and ending with packaging.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Container
  • Melting furnace
  • Molten glass
  • Gob
  • Conveyor belt
  • Mold
  • Cooling
  • Annealing
  • Finishing touches
  • Quality inspection
  • Packaging
  • Distribution
  • Automated
  • Environmental impact
  • Temperature control
  • Glassware
  • Manufacturing process
  • Perfection
  • Impurities
  • Recycling
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