The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the process of shaping
glass
containers which can be roughly divided into two stages.
Initially
, glass
particles are put into a furnace with a temperature of 105 degrees Celsius and melted into a piece of hot glass
. Then
the hot glass
is pressed into the first mould where
is shaped into a Correct word choice
which
container
with thick
wall. After Correct article usage
a thick
transformed
into the second mould, Wrong verb form
transforming
this
container
is further
shaped through
Change preposition
by
blowed
in the air outside.
The following stages are mainly aimed at staying in shape and packaging. The shaped Correct your spelling
blew
container
in the second mould is transformed into a kiln where the container
is heated at 482 degrees Celsius and then
cooled at 25 degrees Celsius for 60 minutes to contain its shape. Finally
, every glass
container
are
checked by engineers Change the verb form
is
in
which the completed containers are packaged and broken ones are collected in a waste bucket.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the process consists of nine steps, beginning with melting glasses and ending with packaging.Submitted by 1278948168 on
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