The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the process of shaping
glass
containers which can be roughly divided into two stages.
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Initially
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glass
particles are put into a furnace with a temperature of 105 degrees Celsius and melted into a piece of hot Use synonyms
glass
. Use synonyms
Then
the hot Linking Words
glass
is pressed into the first mould Use synonyms
where
is shaped into a Correct word choice
which
container
with Use synonyms
thick
wall. After Correct article usage
a thick
transformed
into the second mould, Wrong verb form
transforming
this
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container
is Use synonyms
further
shaped Linking Words
through
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by
blowed
in the air outside.
The following stages are mainly aimed at staying in shape and packaging. The shaped Correct your spelling
blew
container
in the second mould is transformed into a kiln where the Use synonyms
container
is heated at 482 degrees Celsius and Use synonyms
then
cooled at 25 degrees Celsius for 60 minutes to contain its shape. Linking Words
Finally
, every Linking Words
glass
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container
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are
checked by engineers Change the verb form
is
in
which the completed containers are packaged and broken ones are collected in a waste bucket.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the process consists of nine steps, beginning with melting glasses and ending with packaging.Linking Words
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