The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
The line graph describes the utilisation of four types of
meat
in European country
from 1979 to 2004.The given measurement Fix the agreement mistake
countries
in
Add a missing verb
is in
grams
per person per week.
In the begin
,the use of fish Replace the word
beginning
meat
in 1979 started on
60 Change preposition
at
grams
per person per week and it was minimal
decline in 1984 Add an article
a minimal
the minimal
moreover
,it was fluctuated
Change to the active voice
fluctuated
along
Change preposition
throughout
the
all Remove the article
apply
period
in
1984 to 2004.
Change preposition
from
Furthermore
,the lamb meat
above the fish meat
it
was 150 Correct pronoun usage
apply
grams
and it was
Verb problem
apply
also
fluctuating
during the all Wrong verb form
fluctuated
period
although
,the meat
of chicken begin
at 140 Wrong verb form
began
grams
but it was during the fluctuation it was
went up Unnecessary verb
apply
all
Change preposition
for all
type
of meats Fix the agreement mistake
types
at
250 Change preposition
to
grams
in 2004 in the end of the period
.
On the other hand
,the meat
of beef at 220 grams
higher was all meat
and it was decreased in 2004 at 100 grams
per person per week.All types of meat
in foreign nations fluctuated along
the Change preposition
throughout
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
period
.Submitted by rs55169611 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, grams, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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