There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear sirs/madams, I am a regular

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passenger

of

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on

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your

bus

route. But,

last

two weeks, your

companys

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company

bus

had some

problem

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problems

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and

i

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I

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need to

complan

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complain

it

to

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you now! First of all, your service had a bit problem, the staff made me feel uncomfortable, they were very impolite and he made me cross when I asked him something I

want

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to know.

Secondly

, the price of

ticket

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was

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increased higher than the past

so much

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,

how

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the price

was

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increased

nearly

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50

percentage

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per cent

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for

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over

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2

week

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.

Moreover

, your

bus

was

more dirty

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than ever with

the

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waste everywhere in the

bus

. All of that made me feel unreliable your

bus

again and

i

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know, more and more individuals who used your service

last

two week was angry like me. If you want to earn more money from us, you need to change your work style and the staff must learn how to be a good

emloyer

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employees

,

beacause

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because

this

is a public service, everyone can use

bus

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the bus

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for

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to

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go everywhere, so with

there

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their

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problems,

i

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think

its

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so hard to reliable your company again.

Thanks

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youto read

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you for reading

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my letter, I

wish

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your

bus

company be great again!