There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear sirs/madams,
I am a regular
of
passenger Change preposition
apply
of
your Change preposition
on
bus
route. But, last
two weeks, your companys
Correct your spelling
company
bus
had some problem
and Fix the agreement mistake
problems
i
need to Change the capitalization
I
complan
it Correct your spelling
complain
to
you now! First of all, your service had a bit problem, the staff made me feel uncomfortable, they were very impolite and he made me cross when I asked him something I Change preposition
with
want
to know. Wrong verb form
wanted
Secondly
, the price of ticket
Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
was
increased higher than the pastVerb problem
has
so much
, Rephrase
apply
how
the price Rephrase
apply
was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
nearly
50 Change preposition
by nearly
percentage
Replace the word
per cent
for
2 Change preposition
over
week
. Change to a plural noun
weeks
Moreover
, your bus
was more dirty
than ever with Replace the words
dirtier
the
waste everywhere in the Correct article usage
apply
bus
. All of that made me feel unreliable your bus
again and i
know, more and more individuals who used your service Change the capitalization
I
last
two week was angry like me. If you want to earn more money from us, you need to change your work style and the staff must learn how to be a good emloyer
, Correct your spelling
employees
beacause
Correct your spelling
because
this
is a public service, everyone can use bus
Add an article
the bus
a bus
for
go everywhere, so with Change preposition
to
there
problems, Correct your spelling
their
i
think Change the capitalization
I
its
so hard to reliable your company again. Replace the word
it's
it is
Thanks
Correct subject-verb agreement
Thank
youto read
my letter, I Wrong verb form
you for reading
wish
your Verb problem
hope
bus
company be great again!Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Provide a clear introduction and address the manager directly.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into paragraphs and focus on a single idea in each paragraph.
task achievement
Use appropriate formal language and tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
Include specific details about the problems you have encountered with the bus service.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.
grammatical range
Review your grammar to ensure accurate and grammatically correct sentences.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
