The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate information about the
time
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which workers spent on several dissimilar activities in a specific country in the
years
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of
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1958 and 2008.
Overall
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, people spent most of their
time
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for
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working in both
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. When looking in detail, in 2008, 42% of adults'
time
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was spent at work, 9% more than that in 1958. Their
time
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for relaxing at home was
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higher than 50
years
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ago with 8% to 13%.
In addition
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, there was a slight difference between the
years
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for other interests or playing sports, it increased
6
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% to 8%.
On the contrary
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, the
time
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which
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was spent on travel to work increased more with 6% and reached 8% in 2008. In 1958, labourers spent 7% more
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for sleeping than 25% in 2008.
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sleeping, the
time
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individuals spent going out with their friends and family declined by 3 times with 6% in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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