The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavant.
The bar chart compares the profit of one city during families' spend their weekly in two years(1965,2018).
Overall
, we can see the country spent almost for food in 1986 but in 2018 change. They spend on leisure.
In contrast
, there was the highest percentage of spending on food and it arrived at a profit 35%while
in 2018 the proportion increased to under 20%.Futhermore
, in 1968, there was spending on housing and leisure around 10% but in 2018it it Correct your spelling
Furthermore
change
. there climb between 15% and under 25%.
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changed
On the other hand
, transport decreased between 1968and2018.there arrived a percentage of under 15% and above 5%.Submitted by Loody on
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