You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager, In your letter Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well.
This
is to inform you regarding my willingness to get a short term
assessment exposure in our Canadian office for six months. I appreciate your kind consideration in Add a hyphen
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As you know, my MBA dissertation is related Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
with
the analysis of the business model in various locations of our company, it is mandatory for me to get Change preposition
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the
real exposure to the business operations in the local context of Canada. Correct article usage
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Hence
, I believe an STA is an ideal opportunity for me to get the
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hands on
experience there.
In relation to the current job responsibilities of my role, I have already spoken to Add a hyphen
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Mr.
Sugath as to how the work can be split between myself and himChange the punctuation
Mr
,
so that I can manage it Remove the comma
apply
while
I stay in Canada. He also
have
provided his consent to undertake the suggested tasks and soon I will share the agreed plan with you.
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Finally
, as I need to get a
formal approval in written form from your end to be submitted to Correct article usage
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Canadian
office to arrange by Visa, it Correct article usage
the Canadian
is
highly appreciated if you could provide the relevant letter within the next week if possible.
Thank you in advance for your extended support in granting permission and giving me the support to utilize my expertise in a foreign country.
Yours sincerely,
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