You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your personality say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask for a job position in your organisation, as one of my friends told me about your summer camp activities. I am currently studying medicine at the University of McGill, and as an independent international student, I have to earn money to cover my tuition fees. So It would be a great opportunity for me to take the benefits of summer vacation by working with you as a part-time employee. Those who know me in person are totally aware of my special ability in team management and coordination tasks. I
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have a hard-working personality
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and tend to put my duties prior to anything else until the goal is achieved. I used to work in a newspaper office, where I did most of the administrative tasks, and it was
then
I realised how great I could handle so much pressure in a working environment.
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, I had to learn French to be able to communicate with some of our foreign reporters. I think that skill of mine could
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be useful in your camp. I would really appreciate it if you consider me as a potential workforce for the next summer. So, I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Arash Abbasi
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