The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram demonstrates the production of electricity by using geothermal energy.
This
procedure consists of five steps. The first three steps are happening under the ground, and the Linking Words
last
two levels are on the flat, by the usage of some machines like turbine or generator.
In the first stage, the cold Linking Words
water
is pumped into the injection well, which is 4.5 km long. Use synonyms
Then
, the cold Linking Words
water
reaches the geothermal zone, which is scorching hot, and full of rocks. The Use synonyms
water
should be stored there to become boiling hot. Use synonyms
Then
, the hot Linking Words
water
should be pumped up through the production well, which has the same length.
In the fourth step, the hot Use synonyms
water
is raised up by a condenser and converted to steam. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
last
step is the turbine which is powered by steam and starts spinning. The turbine transfers the energy into the generator to produce electricity. And the generator will spread the electricity through the wires and machines.Linking Words
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