The graph below shows unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The following graph represents the unemployment stages in Ireland
,
and the number of Remove the comma
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people
migrating to another country between 1988 and 2008.
As a whole, the unemployment rates were dramatically high in the decades between 1988 to 2000, and it
fell drastically in 2000. Correct pronoun usage
they
People
leaving has seen some fluctuations,
and got to its peak in 1990.
In 1988, the unemployment Remove the comma
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rate
was about 18 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
,
and fell sharply to 13 Remove the comma
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percent
in the next 2 Change the spelling
per cent
years
. Again, in 1990 we witnessed a rise, and it reached the same percentage as in 1988. Then
, the rate
of joblessness dropped gradually over the years
, till it reached to
its lowest Change preposition
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rate
in 2000. The trend stayed the same in the following years
, and surprisingly in 2008, the situation got worse drastically.
Moving on to the citizens leaving the country, about 30,000 people
departed from their homeland, and in the next two years
, the number of people
,
climbed sharply and reached more than 60,000 Remove the comma
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people
. In the next years
, the trend became backward and fewer people
tended to leave. According to
the data, between the years
1990 to 2008, the number was slightly more than 20,000. Again in 2008, this
rate
rose dramatically to 40,000 people
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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