You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • introduce yourself. • describe the problem. • say what you would like the manager to do. Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style. You can use this page for any rough work.

Good morning Dear Mr Bean My name is Amirbek. I am a tourist and
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am writing
you
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in order to address a
problem
, which cannot be solved for the
last
2 days. Let me start from the beginning. I booked a room from
hotel
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.
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few hours later
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started having problems with
shower
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. It is not working. And I turned to the studio staff to fix my
shower
. He could not fix it. Now I want to contact the manager about a
problem
with the
shower
. Since I paid a lot of money, it is not good that they cannot
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fix my
shower
. I will be glad if you solve my
problem
. I hope you will resolve the
problem
to my satisfaction Yours faithfully.
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Make sure to address all the points mentioned in the prompt in your response.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a clear and logical manner. Use paragraphs to separate different ideas or aspects of the problem.
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Pay attention to sentence structure, grammar, and punctuation to improve the overall clarity and coherence of your writing.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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