You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • introduce yourself. • describe the problem. • say what you would like the manager to do. Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style. You can use this page for any rough work.
Good morning
Dear Mr Bean
My name is Amirbek. I am a tourist and
i
am writing Change the capitalization
I
you
in order to address a Change preposition
to you
problem
, which cannot be solved for the last
2 days.
Let me start from the beginning. I booked a room from hotel
. Correct article usage
the hotel
After a
few hours later Correct word choice
A
i
started having problems with Change the capitalization
I
shower
. It is not working.
And I turned to the studio staff to fix my Wrong verb form
showering
shower
. He could not fix it. Now I want to contact the manager about a problem
with the shower
. Since I paid a lot of money, it is not good that they cannot t
fix my Rephrase
apply
shower
. I will be glad if you solve my problem
.
I hope you will resolve the problem
to my satisfaction
Yours faithfully.Submitted by ina1_95 on
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task achievement
Make sure to address all the points mentioned in the prompt in your response.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a clear and logical manner. Use paragraphs to separate different ideas or aspects of the problem.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more diverse and precise words and phrases to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure, grammar, and punctuation to improve the overall clarity and coherence of your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite