The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside town of Brinslow between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
All the changes the Brinslow town has seen during a
15 year
interval Add a hyphen
15-year
is
depicted by these maps; Correct subject-verb agreement
are
overall
, dominate
alternations have Replace the word
dominant
been
occurred in order to develop and modernize the city which made it more residential.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
, one prominent change is expanding the railway that at
2005 was sketched along the coast. Change preposition
in
Also
, a ferry was built on the southwest corner just close the
railway. Change preposition
to the
At
the west side of the city, all the trees were cut down in order to develop more accommodation including Change preposition
On
airport
located near the river and a built factory above the new railway. Correct article usage
an airport
Also
, the school and the hospital were still at the same place.
Regarding the east region, mostly all the trees and houses were demolished to be converted into flats and a super market
at the Correct your spelling
supermarket
center
of Change the spelling
centre
east
section. Correct article usage
the east
According to
the map, a series of flats have been lined along the off-street and the other flats were located around the lake near the main road.Submitted by n97.mortazian on
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