The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habitis in five Austrlian cities
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the major
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Overall
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In detail, There are five cities in Austrila
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Hobart
. The percentage of Correct word choice
and Hobart
city
residents is from 20% to 62%. The people
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people
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people
of Hobart city
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