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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your letter: give details of the purchase explain the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam..........,

#purchase #company #replacement #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 to express my resentment for the
jacket
 I purchased from your website. I am Jaskaran Singh Awal, and my order number is xx.
Last
 week, I purchased the Wrangler black colour
Jacket
, and the size I ordered was XL.
Moreover
, it was a fresh article without any discount on it.
However
, today when I received the order, it was blue in colour with XXL size which is larger than what I ordered. There is another issue the front zip is
also
 not working smoothly, which is why I think it is a replaced product.
Further
, I ordered
this
jacket
 for a trip for which I will have to leave on coming Sunday.
Therefore
, I need a replacement urgently because I
did
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do
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 not have any other
jacket
 to wear.
Hence
 I request you to please send a replacement on an urgent basis at least before Sunday. Awaiting your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaskaran Singh Awal
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