3-3 Youth unemployment is increasing in many countries in the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?

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different areas.

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, the unemployment rate of youth has

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in many nations. Personally, I think there are several reasons which lead to

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situation, and several solutions will be mentioned in

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essay. The main reason for young people is that there is not enough

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position in the companies. Each year, there are numerous

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university

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who graduate from the same major,

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, the

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demand in a company is far less than

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number.

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, in Taiwan, there are around three

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students

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looking for

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each year, but a clinic or a hospital only need around ten therapists.

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more jobs not only can solve

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issue but

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provide more health

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to

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normal people.

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prefer

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occupation

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. For

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, plenty of

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prefer to choose business or engineering as their major, after they graduate, all of them will apply to the same position or company which

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to the overload of the

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application. In my opinion, encouraging various types of

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to change people’s

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preference

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, if the government

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more funds

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tourism,

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students

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will have more interest in tourism which have a great development and brighter future. In conclusion, not enough

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and too many

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applications in the same occupation contribute to the

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unemployment of youth.

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more opportunities and

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the variation of

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can diminish the ratio of

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unemployment.