The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
The line graph compares the
figure
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figures
show examples
of
people
in the USA who worked in different sectors from 1975 to 2025. It can be observed from the line graph that the
number
of
people
engaged in the agriculture
sector
decreased over a period of 50 years. In 1975, the majority of
people
chose the agriculture
sector
, with approximately 80
million
. The figure remained stable until 1977. In the following years, the
number
of
people
fell dramatically to around 10
million
.
By contrast
, there were around 10
million
people
employed in the service
sector
in 1975. By 2025, the
number
of
people
working in the service
sector
had increased steadily to 90
million
.
On the other hand
, the figure of
people
who worked in the manufacturing
sector
was consistently lower than others.
This
number
also
rose steadily until 1980, and
then
rapidly declined to 10
million
over the following 45 years.
In addition
, every
sector
had the same quantities in 1980, around 40
million
.
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